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Monday 17 February 2020

Swimming

I dived into the pool
It felt so cool


I felt like a Submarine
But my eyes were burning because of the chlorine.

Image result for swimming clipart

2 comments:

  1. Read this poem and just smiled because it sounds like you talking. Good use of technical language and also rhyme. Awesome Kestrel!

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  2. Sup Kestrel Nice poem and the rhyme was cool good work

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